Synopsis: From Amazon:
First Sentence: "The early summer sky was the color of cat vomit."
Do I even need to comment on this?
Brownie Points: The world in which Tally lives is so familiar it's scary. Which is what makes a great Dystopian novel. The characters are very real and completely fun to read.
Ending: Cliff hanger! Did I read the next book? You bet. The rest of the series sits on my desk, waiting for me to have time to read them. PS do not try this at home. If you are not a published, proven, tried and true author, do not leave your book with a cliff hanger. The first book needs to be a stand alone. If that is received well, go ahead and write the rest (see Hunger Games).
Would I represent it? I'd jump on it. Grab it in my hands and dare anyone to pry it from my cold dead fingers. That's how much I would love to represent something like this.